Draft of Magic Ablaze
In the bustling city of Evergreen, magic was as common as breathing. Elara, a young apprentice, worked alongside her mentor, Master Finnley, in the grand Arcane Academy. Their task for the day involved crafting a potion to purify water-a mundane yet essential spell in their society. As they mixed ingredients in a gleaming cauldron, Elara couldn't help but think about the wonders she had seen since she started her apprenticeship. Last week, the city's library had hosted an enchanted book reading, and last month, the market sold magical fruits that glowed under moonlight.
Draft Review of Magic Ablaze
The beginning of the story sets a good tone for a fantasy setting with magic in everyday life. However, the narrative is currently lacking depth and detail. Elara's thoughts about her experiences are brief and could be expanded upon to provide more context and emotion. Additionally, introducing specific magical elements or events that have directly impacted Elara would add richness to the story. The pacing seems a bit slow at the moment, and there is potential for more engaging descriptions of the magical occurrences in Evergreen.