Draft of Hidden Gardens
In the bustling city of Lumina, where the morning dew sparkled with tiny prisms of light and the air hummed with spells, Elara worked as a librarian. The grand library, adorned with towering shelves of ancient tomes and enchanted maps, was her sanctuary. But beneath the calm facade of her mundane job, Elara harbored a secret-she could cast minor spells without any magical artifacts. It began as an innocent experiment in childhood, but it had become something she kept hidden from everyone, including herself.
One crisp autumn evening, as Elara sorted through books on the third floor, a mischievous breeze blew open a window, and an old parchment fluttered out. She caught it just before it could land on the floor, noticing that it bore a familiar rune-a sign she used to practice her newfound abilities in solitude. With a deep breath, Elara hesitated, then let the magic flow through her fingers, causing the parchment to shimmer into a detailed map of Lumina's hidden gardens.
The next morning, Elara found herself drawn to the gardens. She met a young man named Thorne there, who was also exploring the unknown corners of the city. They discovered that the garden was a meeting place for people like them-those who wielded magic without formal training. As they explored and shared their stories, Elara realized she no longer needed to hide her gifts. Together, they embarked on an adventure to uncover Lumina's deepest secrets, all while keeping their extraordinary abilities just out of sight.
Draft Review of Hidden Gardens
The story has a clear and engaging plot. The character development for Elara is well done, showing her internal conflict and growth. However, some pacing issues may make certain parts feel rushed or slow. For example, the transition from finding the parchment to being drawn to the gardens could be smoother. Additionally, adding more details about Lumina's hidden magic society might help readers better understand the significance of Elara and Thorne's discovery.