Draft of Magic in Sight
In the bustling city, where skyscrapers kissed the clouds and streets hummed with the noise of a thousand lives, magic simmered like an invisible cauldron. Sarah walked to work every morning, her feet tapping out familiar patterns on the pavement. She didn't notice the floating confetti from the café window until she turned down the street. Today felt different; perhaps because a flicker of light danced just outside her vision. At noon, Sarah visited her favorite bookstore. The shelves seemed heavier than usual, and she couldn't help but lift a book to feel its weight. As she flipped through the pages, a shimmering aura surrounded them both. It wasn't until the afternoon when Sarah met Emily for lunch that everything changed. Emily, with eyes like starlit skies, handed her a cup of tea. 'You know,' Emily said softly, 'magic is everywhere if you look closely enough.'
Draft Review of Magic in Sight
The draft introduces a setting where magic is subtly woven into daily life. However, it lacks depth in characters' interactions with this magic. Sarah's discovery could benefit from more detail. For example, describe how she reacts to the floating confetti or the shimmering aura surrounding the book. Additionally, consider developing Emily's character further-what makes her unique and why she would share such a profound insight about magic. This will help ground the story in realism while maintaining an air of mystery.