Draft of Time's Weight
In a future where time travel has become reality, Dr. Eleanor Carter navigates the complex web of history to save her dying daughter from an incurable disease. With every step through the temporal portal, she grapples with moral dilemmas and the consequences of altering the past. As she races against time, Eleanor must confront the ethical questions surrounding life and death, and the fragile nature of existence itself.
Draft Review of Time's Weight
The story has a strong foundation but could benefit from more depth in character development and specific details. Consider adding scenes or descriptions that illustrate Eleanor's internal struggle, such as her interactions with loved ones or her thoughts during critical moments at the temporal portal. This will help readers connect more deeply with the protagonist and understand the gravity of her choices. Additionally, expanding on the moral dilemmas she faces could provide a richer narrative experience.