Draft of Midnight Warehouse
In the heart of New York City, under the neon lights of a dimly lit bar, Detective Samira Ahmed sat across from her informant. He was a small man with wiry muscles and sharp eyes that seemed to pierce through the shadows. The air was thick with anticipation as he handed over a crumpled piece of paper.
Draft Review of Midnight Warehouse
Great start! The scene sets up an intriguing scenario with Detective Samira Ahmed and her informant. Consider adding more detail to the setting, such as sounds or smells, to enhance the atmosphere. Also, introduce some tension or conflict early in the dialogue between them.