Draft of Time's Whispers
In a world where magic was common, Lyra was known for her unique powers. She could manipulate the very essence of time itself, bending it to her will. One crisp autumn evening, as leaves whispered secrets among themselves, Lyra stood on the edge of an ancient forest, her hands clasped behind her back. A shimmering aura surrounded her, hinting at the impending changes.
Draft Review of Time's Whispers
The opening sets an intriguing scene with Lyra's unique powers. However, more detail is needed for her motivations and the conflict she faces. The narrative could benefit from describing what Lyra plans to achieve with her time manipulation. Additionally, including a brief introduction of the ancient forest or a hint at its significance would add depth.