Draft of Time's Pendulum
In the year 2145, time travel was more than just a scientific curiosity. It had become an integral part of human life. As a result, society thrived on innovation, constantly pushing the boundaries of what could be achieved in the past and future.
Draft Review of Time's Pendulum
The story starts well by setting up a futuristic world with time travel as an integral part of society. However, it could benefit from more detail about how this technology impacts daily life or specific characters. The narrative should focus on a particular character's experience to make the story more engaging and relatable. Additionally, consider adding conflict or a subplot to keep readers invested in the plot. For example, you could introduce a character who must travel back in time to prevent a catastrophic event that will change their future.